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Originally Posted by TheLegacy
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Not bad, but I think I'd move the shot framing so that the model was more to the left instead of in the center of the shot. Also, those blue tarps in the back right are really bugging me......
What's with the "Junction Produce" pillow? It looks totally out of place, like a forced product placement shot. Lose it, or if you must keep it, do something else with it that is not so forced looking.
The cars in the background seem distracting, especially the one with the ski rack. I don't know what lens you are using, but I wonder how this shot would look with a really shallow DOF? Basically just the back of the car and the models in focus? If you have a slow lens, then you probably can't get the shallow DOF. Maybe a 50mm prime.....
What I'm confused about is what is your primary subject? Is it the car, the models or does it depend on the shot? The middle two are certainly only about the models, which is fine. But the composition comes across more "sleazy" than "sensual." Maybe that was the feel you were looking for, in which case, great!